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Shouts all around,
In the rush of battle,
Anything is possible,
Everything can happen.

I fell to the ground.
I don't know what hit me.
Something sapped my strength,
I thought it was impossible.

I was too fast to be hit,
Or at least, so I thought.
I chuckle at the irony as I lie,
Unable to get up.

I see a familiar face,
One I've seen as if in a Dream.
She picks me up and carries me off.
Where, I don't know.

Shouts all around,
In the rush of battle,
Anything is possible,
Everything can happen.

I seem to be flying,
Soaring through the sky,
It is the best feeling in the world.
I land, and the exhilaration is over.

I see seven emeralds,
Circling around me.
Gems of enormous power,
The only things that can help me.

Each seems to glow,
Shining with mystical secrets.
Until a white flash engulfs me.
Pure chaos energy.

I close my eyes against the brilliance.
I reopen them and see nothing.
Is this the end for me?
The world rushes back.

My head is clear now.
I thank my friend,
And together we fly.
Through the night sky.
Safe, and alive.
Just a few hours ago, I got creeped out by the same feeling I got after seeing Sonic die in the last story of Sonic 06... I just wrote this poem because I felt I had to do or write something about it...
Sonic, NiGHTS copyright Sega.
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WendyLovesGreen Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
o-o what... 0-0 the... 0_o ...hell!!!?!!!
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SONiC-NiGHTALA Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah. I know it was weird why I wrote it... but yeah...
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WendyLovesGreen Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i have nothing to say but Wow
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SONiC-NiGHTALA Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
As in, do you like it or feel it's ridiculous?
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WendyLovesGreen Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
little bit of both
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SONiC-NiGHTALA Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
ah, well, whatever gets me to write poetry, I'll take it...
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WendyLovesGreen Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
question did you do this out of bordem
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SONiC-NiGHTALA Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Sort of...
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YourBuddyBill Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I know how you feel. I have seen a Mario fanfic that was so incredibly horrible that I had to create a storyline to save it.
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SONiC-NiGHTALA Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Nice. I'm glad I'm not the only one :)
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